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dear sunshine,
i like to call people sunshine
especially you because it
seems like it rains a lot
on you.

dear sunshine,
i wear clothes that
i don't really like but
the boy i like likes them
so that's why.

but i think i'm stopping.

dear sunshine,
i dream of a beautiful
boy who will come and
save me and make me feel
happy again. even though
it scares me because i can't
remember how to feel happy.
the boy i like used to make
me feel happy but he doesn't
anymore and i think it's time to
close that certain chapter.
or page.
(who do you dream of?)

dear sunshine,
i have books full
of letters that are half
written and all mixed up
kind of like me.

dear sunshine,
i am invisible on da
and sometimes, i wish
people would just ignore
me and pass by. i hate
keeping it together.

dear sunshine,
summer is fading away
and october is coming very
soon. october makes me feel
things that are supposed to be
gone.

p.s
i took a nap and slept
in the same bed as the guy
i like and for some reason
i can't fall asleep alone anymore.

dear sunshine,
life stopped for me
9 months ago and i think
it hates me. but i hope it
still loves you.

dear sunshine,
they are never enough
words to fill the empty
october and november left
me.

dear sunshine,
the perfect boy likes me
but for some reason
i like boys who yell at me
and make me feel bad about
myself.

dear sunshine,
love is powerful at least
thats what they keep telling me.
all i got from it was books
of half written letters, broken smiles,
cracks in between my fingers, and lonely
nights.

love,
beautiful.
:icontwilightjunkie94:

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it isn't lovely, but nothing really is anymore.

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:iconiloveyouhopie:
i thought it was beautiful. marybeth, your writing is impressive.

if you're willing to take a bit of criticism, how about replace the word "guy" with the word "boy," just because it feels more appropriate.
:icontwilightjunkie94:
thank you hopie love. that means alot to me (:


and yes! i completely agree with you. haha i'll go change it.

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you're my sweetest downfall. i loved you first.

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